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2017-07-27 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Writing Exercise: Answer in not more than 5 sentences.^-^ What is your greatest fear in life? ============================================= My greatest fears are ghosts, scary stories, roller coasters, Tsunami, earthquakes and war. Ghosts and scary stories make me terrified and make it difficult for me to sleep well. I have a fear of height so I hate roller coasters. I watched a movie about Tsunami. Tsunami is dangerous. Tsunami, earthquakes and war make many people die and get hurt. Have a good night~!!^^

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, [이름]!^-^)


This is a nice composition. I have read it well.^^

Thank you for accomplishing your homework.

I can\'t wait to talk to you again. See you late in class!

Enjoy the rest of the day. Happy Thursday! :)


_T. Mayleen ^___^


My greatest fears are ghosts, scary stories, roller coasters, Tsunami, earthquakes and war.

>> My greatest fears are ghosts, scary stories, roller coasters, tsunamis, earthquakes, and wars.


Ghosts and scary stories make me terrified and make it difficult for me to sleep well.

>> CORRECT!


I have a fear of height so I hate roller coasters.

>> I have a fear of heights so I hate roller coasters.


I watched a movie about Tsunami. Tsunami is dangerous.

>> Correct!

DON\'T CAPITALIZE THE \'T\' IN TSUNAMI UNLESS IT\'S THE FIRST WORD IN THE SENTENCE.^-^


Tsunami, earthquakes and war make many people die and get hurt.

>> Tsunamis, earthquakes, and wars result to people\'s death and injury.


Have a good night~!!^^

>> CORRECT!

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