Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름]!^-^)
This is a nice composition. I have read it well.^^
Thank you for accomplishing your homework.
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Enjoy the rest of the day. Happy Thursday! :)
_T. Mayleen ^___^
My greatest fears are ghosts, scary stories, roller coasters, Tsunami, earthquakes and war.
>> My greatest fears are ghosts, scary stories, roller coasters, tsunamis, earthquakes, and wars.
Ghosts and scary stories make me terrified and make it difficult for me to sleep well.
>> CORRECT!
I have a fear of height so I hate roller coasters.
>> I have a fear of heights so I hate roller coasters.
I watched a movie about Tsunami. Tsunami is dangerous.
>> Correct!
DON\'T CAPITALIZE THE \'T\' IN TSUNAMI UNLESS IT\'S THE FIRST WORD IN THE SENTENCE.^-^
Tsunami, earthquakes and war make many people die and get hurt.
>> Tsunamis, earthquakes, and wars result to people\'s death and injury.
Have a good night~!!^^
>> CORRECT!
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