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2017-07-27 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Writing Exercise: Answer each question in not more than 2 sentences or choose 1 question and explain in not more than 5 sentences.^-^ 1. If you were a rich man, where would you go for the next holiday? If I become rich, I will go to Myungdong in Seoul for a day and go shopping.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! Happy Thursday! ^_^)/


Myungdong or Myeongdong is mostly a commercial area, being one of Seoul\'s main shopping and tourism districts.

I would want to go there, too. Instead of shopping, I\'d visit specialty restaurants and eat delicious foods. :)

Thank you for answering your homework. See you later!^^


_T. Mayleen :)


If I become rich, I will go to Myungdong in Seoul for a day and go shopping.

>> If I were rich, I would shop in Myungdong, Seoul for a day.

OR: If I were rich, I would go to Myungdong in Seoul and shop for a day.

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