Homework

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I think a person becomes wise when he is able to learn from his experiences and apply what he has learned at present or in the future.

This does not mean that he becomes perfect but rather better.

Wise people share their knowledge and experiences to others in order to guide them.

Anyhow, this is my perspective in this issue.

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I agree that being wise and smart are different and people need to reach one more step further from just being smart to be wise.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I agree that being wise and smart are two different things and that people need to reach one more step further from just being smart in order to be wise.
I think a smart person is who has many knowledge.
>> I think a smart person is someone who has many knowledge.
A wise person has knowledge too but furthermore, he/she can read the big picture.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> A wise person has knowledge too but furthermore, he/she can see or interpret the big picture.
I want to give an example with workers in administrative position.
>> I want to give an example using the workers in the administrative position.
A new administrator could be smart like he/she graduated famous university with business administration major, knows the latest business strategies.
>> A new administrator could be smart like he/she graduated from a famous university with a business administration major and knows the latest business strategies.
However that smart person can fail to manage the team successfully if he/she only tries to apply the knowledge to people.
>> However, that smart person can fail to manage the team successfully if he/she only tries to apply the knowledge to people.
For example, if an employee is worrying about his/her sick mother, overtime pay can\'t be the most effective way to make the employee concentrate on work.
>> For example, if an employee is worrying about his/her sick mother, the overtime pay can\'t be the most effective way to make the employee concentrate on work.
If other manager is not only smart but also wise, he/she will care the employee\'s personal problem and give a break until the problem is solved.
>> If the other manager is not only smart but also wise, he/she will care about the employee\'s personal problem and give a break until the problem is solved.
People need to look at the big picture to be wise.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> To be wise, people should be able to look at the big picture.
To do that, they must care other people more.
>> To do that, they must care about other people more.