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In some countries, many people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past.

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 I think it\'s a positive development.

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 First, national growth will be developed.

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Becuase they can concentrate on their jobs more than married people. 

>> First, national growth will be developed, because they can concentrate on their jobs more than married people. 
Second, self-development will be possible more.

>>Second, self-development will be more possible.

If he or she gets married, it is difficult that they can learn new hobbies and spend time on them and travlel somewhere.

>>If he or she gets married, it is difficult that they can learn new hobbies and spend time on them and travel somewhere.
 Because they have husband or wife and baby, they don\'t have a lot of time doing what they want.

>>Because they have a husband or a wife and a baby, they don\'t have a lot of time to do what they want.
 Finally, society can be stable more.

>> Finally, society can be more stable.

 Thesedays many marriged people have divorced and fought for their married life. 

>>These days many married people have divorced and fought for their married life. 
 So, I think chossing to live alone has a lot of good things and I understand why they choose to live alone.

>> So, I think choosing to live alone has a lot of good things and I understand why they do so.
In many countries, the more poeple will choose to be solo before.

>>In many countries,  more people have chosen to live a single-household life.