HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
I wish I could have a job and make money by the age of 80 at least.
Having my job or earning money means that I am still doing something meaningful and productive.
I wish I could learn English as long as I am alive.
Even though the modern technology will develop a perfect translating software in the near future, I want to study English continuously.
Learning makes me young.
I wish I could resemble Jesus day by day and little by little, with myself focused on His providence.
It's because I must not be fearful of death and I have to accept my dearth at any time.
After 5 years, I will still be making money, practicing English and becoming a more devout Christian.
Sophia,
I'd like to talk about the Senior English Article "polyamorous marriage"(July 26, 2017) tomorrow morning.
강사 첨삭
HELLO MR. [이름],
Thank you for doing your homework.
I am so impressed on the way you look at life.
I hope I also have the same point of you with you when I reach your age.
I want to become a more devout Christian too.
Anyway, have a nice day ahead!
Teacher Sophia ^^
Here are your corrections:
I wish I could have a job and make money by the age of 80 at least.
>> CORRECT
Having my job or earning money means that I am still doing something meaningful and productive.
Having my job or earning money means that I am still doing something meaningful and productive.
>> CORRECT
I wish I could learn English as long as I am alive.
I wish I could learn English as long as I am alive.
>> CORRECT
Even though the modern technology will develop a perfect translating software in the near future, I want to study English continuously.
Even though the modern technology will develop a perfect translating software in the near future, I want to study English continuously.
>> Even though the modern technology will develop a perfect translating software in the near future, I want to continuously study English.
Learning makes me young.
>> CORRECT
I wish I could resemble Jesus day by day and little by little, with myself focused on His providence.
I wish I could resemble Jesus day by day and little by little, with myself focused on His providence.
>> CORRECT
It\'s because I must not be fearful of death and I have to accept my dearth at any time.
It\'s because I must not be fearful of death and I have to accept my dearth at any time.
>> It\'s because I must not be fearful of death and I have to accept death at any time.
After 5 years, I will still be making money, practicing English and becoming a more devout Christian.
After 5 years, I will still be making money, practicing English and becoming a more devout Christian.
>> CORRECT
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