Homework

Hi, [이름]!

Wow! I can\'t believe it\'s Friday. ^_^

How is your day going? I hope you\'re enjoying it.

Thank you for taking the time to write another essay.

It was awesome as usual because you\'ve given a great example in relation to it.

Being assertive is important.

You\'re right when you said our leaders are humans too and they could make mistakes anytime.

Sometimes, our leaders\' decisions also need to be questioned and verified not because we want to put them in shame but because we need to look at the bigger picture and decide whether their decisions would truly benefit the majority.

That\'s it for this week.
I hope you learned a lot.

I\'ll see you again on Monday.
Take care always.

~Teacher Charry :)

Questioning ideas and decisions of authorities is necessary for both authorities and other people.
>> Questioning ideas and decisions of authorities is necessary for both the authorities and other people.
It\'s not easy to question about decisions made by people having authorities, but if no one questions the people who have powers, they would make wrong decisions.
>> It\'s not easy to question about the decisions made by people having authorities but if no one questions the people in power, they would make wrong decisions.
Because humans can\'t be always right.
>> This is because humans can\'t be always right.
Furthermore, questioning to authorities\' decisions are important because not only people making decisions but also many other people are affected by the decisions.
>> Furthermore, questioning authorities\' decisions are important because many people are affected by their decisions.
I saw a lawyer who wanted to launch his own law education brand.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I came across a lawyer who wanted to launch his own law education brand.
He showed his curriculum to some students including me and I thought it doesn\'t look that good.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> He showed his curriculum to a number of students including me and I thought it didn\'t look that good.
He was a formal judge and successful lawyer already and seemed never has thought he could fail to something.
>> He was a formal judge and a successful lawyer already and it seemed that he has never thought that he could fail at something.
Every student including me didn\'t like the curriculum but we didn\'t say any negative things to him.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Every student including me didn\'t like the curriculum but we didn\'t say any negative comments to him.
I heard that his education brand didn\'t go well and eventually his law office was driven out.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I heard that his education brand didn\'t go well and his law office eventually went down.
This can be an example of a leader who is never questioned by others.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> This scenario is a depicts a leader who is never questioned by others.