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Newspapers should only state objective facts, [이름]!
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I think newspapers should not be completely free to say whatever they want.
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In my opinion, there are two reasons.
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First, newspapers must infom objective facts.
>> First, newspapers must state objective facts.
If they say completely free, informaion will be not correct.
>> If they say completely free, information will be not correct.
Next, newspapers have to be fair.
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Because many people read and trust them.
>> Next, newspapers have to be fair, because many people read and trust them.
If they say whatever they want, readers can have wrong thinkings.
>> If they say whatever they want, readers can have wrong thoughts.
Although, I think that it is possible to write completely free in specific coners of newspapers.
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But execept for this, newspapers should always be careful when they say something.
>>But except for this, newspapers should always be careful when they say something.
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