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2017-07-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

if somebody were pointing me with the gun, i'll say to him. shoot me if you want. there is no reason that i live. but if you don't do that, there would be some reason i should keep living. i don't care you do or not. it depends on God's decision.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ella!

Thanks for your composition today! Whoa! Your answer to our homework is very impressive! Way to go!

T. JanE ^^

if somebody were pointing me with the gun, i\'ll say to him. shoot me if you want. there is no reason that i live. 

>> If I were being held at gunpoint, I would tell the gunman, \"Shoot me if you want. There is no reason for me to live.\" 

but if you don\'t do that, there would be some reason i should keep living.

>> \"But if you don\'t, there could be some reasons for me to keep living.\" 

i don\'t care you do or not.

>> \"I don\'t care whether you do it or don\'t.\" 

It depends on God\'s decision.

>> Correct


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