Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Ma\'am Sylvia!
Thank you for sharing your opinion. Please review my corrections.
See you in class!
~Kelly^^
Do you think it\'s possible to have a happy family and a successful career at the same time? Answer in five (5) sentences.
It can successful at the same time.
>> You can be successful in both areas.
There is a social commitment such as short working time,it is possible
>> I think, it is possible as long as you make a balance between work and social life.
It need time to play,time to listen to the children at home, at company time to work
>> You need time to play and listen to your children when at home and time to work.
it need someone\'s sacrifice and time margin.
>> You need t sacrifice your time.
The succee requires the family and society of conversation.
>> Success requires equal time for the family and the society.
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