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It is definitely better for children to study foreign languages since they can learn everything by heart^^

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Some people think that children are more succesful in foreign languages studies than adults.

>>Some people think that children are more succesful in foreign language studies than adults.

 To what extent I agree for some reasons.

>>I agree for some reasons.
 First, when learning foreign languages, confidence is the most important.

>>CORRECT!

 Because adults have experience of failures more than chilren, so they don\'t have a lot of confidence

>>Because adults have experienced more failures, they don\'t have a lot of confidence.

 It can be interrupted to study new language.

>> It can be interrupted to study a new language.
 Second, when studying other languages, It is possible to give variety enviroments for children.

>> Second, when studying other languages, it is possible to give children a variety of environment.

 For example, language training abroad, immigration, national kindergarten etc.

>>For example, they can undergo language training abroad, pursue immigration,  enroll in a national kindergarten etc.
 Finally, effort and studying hours are very important.

>>CORRECT!

 Chilren can spend more time studying languages than adults.

>>CORRECT!

 Because Adults usually work, they can study a foreign language for spare time.

>>Because adults usually work, they can study a foreign language during their spare time.
 For theses reasons, I also think children can study foreign languages more succesful than adults.

>>For these reasons, I also think children can study foreign languages more successfully than adults.