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Good evening, [이름]!^-^
Well, being an athlete isn\'t forever.
As you grow older, your speed, power, agility, etc. decreases.
Still, strive if you want to be the best just like her.
I know you can do it!^_-
Good night!
_T. Mayleen :)
Kim Yun-Ah was the most famous spots player in Korea.
>> Kim Yun-Ah was the most famous athlete in Korea.
Now she is retired but she is a famous cosmetic, bank, coffee and jewelry model like an entertainer.
>> Now that she\'s retired, she\'s a model for cosmetic, bank, coffee, and jewelry advertisements.
She always practiced very hard so she won the gold medal.
>> She always practiced hard so she won the gold medal.
My mom sometimes tells me that I am similar to her.
>> CORRECT!
I want to be the best person like her.
>> I want to be the best just like her.
Have a sweet dream~!!^^
>> Have a good night!^^
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