Homework

Hi, [이름]!

How is your day going? I hope you\'re enjoying it.

Thank you for taking the time to write another essay.

It was awesome as usual because you\'ve given a great example in relation to it.

I think the consequence of technology is environmental destruction.

That\'s why we should work hard in making sure that our inventions are environment friendly as well. 

I guess getting our environment destroyed is inevitable due to the continuous advancements in technology.  

I hope people would be more conscious about their environment.

That\'s it for today.

See you again tomorrow.

~Teacher Charry :)

High technologies can give us a huge benefit but they also cause accidents.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> The latest technologies can provide a huge benefit but they also cause disadvantages.

The problem of those accidents is that the scale of accidents is way much bigger than previous accidents.

>> The problem with those accidents is that the scale of accidents is way much bigger than the previous accidents.

For example, nuclear power plants make use electricity at a cheap price.

>> For example, nuclear power plants make use of the electricity at a cheap price.

At the same time, a small malfunction of the power plant can cause a disaster.

>> At the same time, a slight malfunctioning of the power plant can cause a disaster.

Another frustrating consequence caused by the latest technology is that most people not only can\'t solve the problem but also can\'t even understand what\'s the cause of the problem.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Another frustrating result caused by the latest technology is that most people not only can\'t solve the problem but also can\'t even identify the cause of the problem.

It\'s impossible to expect passengers to solve the problem of a broken airplane.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> You cannot expect passengers to solve the problem of a broken airplane.

People using the latest technologies are exposed to risks all the time but can\'t predict accidents or actively prevent risks by themselves.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> People using the latest technologies are exposed to risks often but don\'t have the capability to predict accidents or actively prevent risks among themselves.

However we also can\'t just abandon those technologies due to risks.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> However we also can\'t just abandon those developments just because of risks.

Using unlimited electricity and going to abroad by airplanes enhanced the quality of lives.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> The use of electricity and airplanes enhanced the quality of lives.

High technologies have their own risks but they also give us many benefits.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> The advanced technologies have their own risks but they also give us many benefits.