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2017-08-01 · 첨삭 강사 Luna

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Writing Activity! ~What is your favorite sport to play? Why do you like it and who do you play it with? My favorite sport is playing basketball. I like it because when I win the basketball game.,I feel very happy that I got a good score. I play basketball with my dad and some middle school students.

강사 첨삭


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Hi [이름],


Thank you so much for doing your homework.

I checked with your previous teacher and she said that you have always done your homework\'s diligently in the past.

And I already noticed how fast you can learn things during our class.

Keep up the good work, my dear!


Enjoy the rest of the day!


See you!

:)

Teacher Luna





HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing Activity!
~What is your favorite sport to play? Why do you like it and who do you play it with?

My favorite sport is playing basketball. I like it because when I win the basketball game.,I feel very happy that I got a good score.
I play basketball with my dad and some middle school students.


My favorite sport is playing basketball. CORRECT

I like it because when I win the basketball game.,I feel very happy that I got a good score.


>>I like it because whenever I win, I feel very happy that I got a good score.

OR

>>I like it because winning the game makes me very happy.

I play basketball with my dad and some middle school students.  CORRECT


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