homework
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Hi [이름],
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
I checked with your previous teacher and she said that you have always done your homework\'s diligently in the past.
And I already noticed how fast you can learn things during our class.
Keep up the good work, my dear!
Enjoy the rest of the day!
See you!
:)
Teacher Luna
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing Activity!
~What is your favorite sport to play? Why do you like it and who do you play it with?
My favorite sport is playing basketball. I like it because when I win the basketball game.,I feel very happy that I got a good score.
I play basketball with my dad and some middle school students.
My favorite sport is playing basketball. CORRECT
I like it because when I win the basketball game.,I feel very happy that I got a good score.
>>I like it because whenever I win, I feel very happy that I got a good score.
OR
>>I like it because winning the game makes me very happy.
I play basketball with my dad and some middle school students. CORRECT
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