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I strongly believe that any person can enhance himself in order to become whoever he wants.

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People say that some people are born with their talents and others are not.

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Although they are not born with specific talents, I think that any child can be taught to become good sports person or musician.

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 There are some reasons that I claim.

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 First, effort is not betray result.

>> First, effort does not betray result.

If he or she practices everyday, his or her ability will be upgraded.

>>If he or she practices every day, his or her ability will be upgraded.
 But the people have to spend a lot of time on practice more than talent people.

>>However, average people have to spend a lot of time on practice more than talented people.
 Second, intersting is the most important to succes.

>> Second, interest is the most important to succeed.

 If someone likes something very much, he or she can also practice.

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It can help someone to become a good sports person, musician, artist etc..

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 There are many successed people in our society.

>> There are many successful people in our society.

 But all is not born with certain talents, so I think any child can learn to become good sports person or musician.

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