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Hello, [이름]! :)

Time is so fast, right?

I can\'t believe we\'ve reached the middle of the week again.   

I really appreciate your concern. Don\'t worry though because I\'m now feeling so much better. ^^

Thank you for this wonderful essay.

I absolutely appreciate your good sentences, thoughts and honesty.

I also believe that learning does not only take place in the four walls of a classroom.

Most of the practical knowledge that we need for our daily living can be gathered outside the classroom.

Children should not only be confined in doing academic studies but should also be allowed to explore their environment and learn how to deal with other people under different situations.

Anyhow, that is my point-of-view in this matter.

I hope you\'re doing great.

See you again tomorrow.

~Teacher Charry :)

Influences from others especially from family play the basic role to individuals\' education.

>> Influences from others especially from family play the basic role to an individuals\' education.

Under a modernized school education system, children raised in middle class families get better rate than children from relatively poor families.

>> Under a modernized school education system, children raised in middle class families get a better rate than children from relatively poor families.

This is not only because of the amount of money which parents spend for their children\'s education but also due to their cultural backgrounds.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> This is true not only because of the amount of money which parents spend for their children\'s education but also due to their cultural backgrounds.

According to some cultural researches in England, school teachers show more positive reactions to children who use standard accent and use words mainly used by white color workers.

>> According to some cultural researches in England, school teachers show more positive reactions to children who use standard accent and use words mainly used by Caucasian workers.

Children are exposed to different cultural background influenced by their parents\' job and educational level and current school systems prefer a certain kind of social class.

>> Children are exposed to different cultural background influenced by their parents\' job and educational level. In addition to that, current school systems prefer a certain kind of social class.

That preference has an effect on children\'s school grade and finally on whole educational results.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> That preference has an effect on children\'s school grade and finally on educational results as a whole.

In conclusion, in many cases, school systems are an important part of education but influences from other people are more crucial on children\'s education.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> In conclusion, in most instances, school systems are an important part of education but influences from other people are more crucial on children\'s education.