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In my case, I love both of them^^
Teenage years gave me freedom from any responsibility; whereas, adulthood gave me independence to do anything^^
 Although, adult life is also happy, I think that teenage years are the happiest in our life.

>>CORRECT!

 There are some reasons that I think.

>>There are some reasons that I thought of.

First of all, teenagers can be protected by parents.

>>CORRECT!

Generally, they don\'t have to worry food, house, money because their parents give them to children.

>>Generally, they don\'t have to worry about food, house, money because their parents give them everything.

 So they don\'t feel stress less than adults.

>>Therefore, they are less stressed than adults.
 Next, teenagers can be protected by society.

>>CORRECT!

 Although they make mistakes, many people and regulations often understand because they are young.

>>Although they make mistakes, many people and regulations often understand them because they are young.
 Finally, teenagers are usually healthy and beautiful more than adulthood.

>>Finally, teenagers are usually healthier and more beautiful than adults.

 So many people envy and miss that time.

>>Finally, teenagers are usually healthier and more beautiful than adults, so many people envy and miss that time.
 For those reasons, I think teenage years are like shining stars and I want to live that time one more. 

>>For those reasons, I think teenage years are like shining stars and I want to live in that time once again.