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Hi, [이름]! ^_^v

Is it scorching hot in Korea now?

I hope you\'re coping just fine.

Thanks for writing a great essay.

I think your point of view in this matter was awesome.

You\'re right when you said not all new solutions are the best solutions.

I often think that new solutions should be searched for only when the old solutions are not applicable anymore.

Old solutions should still be used but modified along the way. :)

Anyhow, that\'s just my opinion.

I hope this day would be a productive one for you.

See you again tomorrow.

Take care.

~Teacher Charry :)

People often think that using new solutions can be the most efficient way to solve problems.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> It is a common mentality that using new solutions can be the most efficient way to solve problems.

Maybe this tendency is quite natural because new things generally have positive images like progress, development.

>> Maybe this tendency is quite natural because new things generally have positive images like progress and development.

However new solutions are sometimes not the best answer to solve problems.

>> However, new solutions are sometimes not the best answers to solve problems.

This happens especially when the problem has multiple causes related with people.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> This takes place especially when the problem has multiple causes which are related with people.

For example, old citizens might not want a brand new solution but want to follow the old way.

>> For example, old citizens might not want a brand new solution and want to follow the old way.

If people need to learn certain skills to use the new solution, old people might find it\'s difficult to learn and get stressed too much.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> If people have to learn certain skills to be able to use the new solution, old people might find it difficult and very stressful.

In that case, even if the new solution was designed in more productive way, the whole result could be worse than before.

>> In that case, even if the new solution was designed in a more productive way, the whole result could be worse than before.

I honestly think that it\'s hard to find something \'always\' good.

>>I honestly think that it\'s hard to find something that is \'always\' good.

New solutions and old solutions are both needed according to situations.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> New solutions and old solutions are both needed depending on the situations.