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I know the one-of-a-kind experience a person gets when he travels to exotic places.

However, I don\'t think I am willing to risk my life TT

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Nowadays, more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara desert or Antarctic.

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I think there are some benefits and some disadvantages.

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 First of benefits, when we are traveling those places, we can see a lot of shining stars.

>>First, when we are traveling to those places, we can see a lot of shining stars.

Because there are few artificial lights for example neon signs, street lamps, car\'s head light etc.

>>First, when we are traveling to those places, we can see a lot of shining stars, because there are few artificial lights for example neon signs, street lamps, car\'s head light etc.
 Second, we can experience something new, amazing, special because the places have a viriety of environments. 

>> Second, we can experience something new, amazing, and special because the places have a variety of environment. 

 After visiting the places, they will be remembered for good memories.

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 Third, the places can help us to increase our patience.

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We have to walk for a long time and endure hot weather in the Sahara desert and cold weather in the Antarctic. 

>>We have to walk for a long time and endure the hot weather in the Sahara desert and the old weather in the Antarctic. 
 On the other hand, it is possible to happen danger situations.

>> On the other hand, dangerous situations can possibly happen.

 Although we become sick suddenly, there are not hospitals and people who can help me right away.

>>Although we become  suddenly sick, there are not any hospitals and people who can help us right away.
 Next, their nature-enviroments can be pollutted by tourists.

>> Next, nature can be polluted by tourists.

Some people may throw trash such as food, plastic etc.

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