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2017-08-03 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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if i could change the sentense the sign held on the blind man's hands, i will re-write like this. there is no workplace left for me because my eye sight is not left anymore. i can't find proper job i can do. my job is closed as if my sight is closed. I don't wish that my eyes open anymore. But desperately i wish that my mouth open with food.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ella!

Thanks for your composition today! How\'s it going? Were you able to satisfy your cravings yesterday? I hope you did. Have a good day!

T. JanE ^^

if i could change the sentense the sign held on the blind man\'s hands, i will re-write like this.
>> If I could change the sentence on the sign held by the blind man, I would re-write it into this: 
there is no workplace left for me because my eye sight is not left anymore.

>> I can\'t find a job because my eye sight is gone.

i can\'t find proper job i can do.

>> There\'s no proper job that I can do. 

my job is closed as if my sight is closed.

>> Job opportunity for me is closed as my eyes are. 

I don\'t wish that my eyes open anymore.

>> I don\'t wish for my eyes to be open anymore.

But desperately i wish that my mouth open with food.

>> But desperately, I wish for my mouth to be opened with some food.

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