Homework!

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What you did is commendable. Even though you were not able to enter the music department, you didn\'t give up doing what you want. Keep it up!

~Teacher Shanee^^,

Composition making!
Tell me about a time when you almost lost your confidence.

I took a exam to play guitar for Music University.

>>> I played the guitar as my audition piece to enter the music department.
 I had exercised to enter university for seven hours per day.

>>> I had practiced for seven hours a day just to enter the university.
 But I couldn\'t entrance because there are SO MANY people who talent for musical ability.

>>> But I couldn\'t make it because there were so many people who were talented in music.

hence, I almost lost my confidence and had to find other way to do something what I like or my ability.

>>> Hence, I almost lost my confidence and I had to find other ways to do what I like and improve my ability.
 Now, I think that it is very good experience my life.

>>> Correct!

And I\'m doing well.

>>> Correct!