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I think the sources of motivation depend on a person\'s personality and perspective.

For me, I find negative situations a greater motive than positive situations.

I honestly believe that problems or challenges are opportunities or blessings in disguise.

Anyhow, that\'s just my thought.

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There are two causes motivate people to chance.

>> There are two causes/things that motivate people to change.

One is a positive cause and the other is a negative cause.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> One is a positive reason and the other is a negative reason.

Feeling shame is one of the example of negative causes.

>> Feeling shame is one of the examples of the negative causes.

I couldn\'t use chopsticks well when I was 10 years old.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I had a hard time using chopsticks when I was 10 years old.

One day, a woman saw me using chopsticks and said \'How come you still can\'t use chopsticks in right way?\'.

>> One day, a woman saw me using chopsticks and said, \'How come you still can\'t use chopsticks in the right way?\'.

I felt huge shame because my parents were also there and the woman\'s words sounded like my parents hadn\'t taught me the good table manner.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I felt very embarrassed because my parents were also there and the woman\'s words sounded like my parents didn\'t teach me good table manners.

I fixed my previous wrong habit immediately.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I immediately fixed that wrong habit of mine.

However I think positive causes like fulfilling own satisfaction or making parents happy are better than negative causes.

>> However, I think positive causes like fulfilling one\'s own satisfaction or making parents happy are better than negative causes.

Because being motivated by positive feelings enhances positive feelings while people try to achieve their goal.

>> This is because being motivated by positive feelings enhances positive feelings while people try to achieve their goal.