Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]! (^_^)
When I hear the word \'power\', government springs to my mind.
Governments have power over their territory.
I just hope, those who are working in and for the government will use their power in a good way.
Thank you for this composition. :)
Have a great weekend!
_T. Mayleen :)
When I hear the word \'power\', renewable energy and ability spring to my mind.
>> CORRECT!
Renewable energy like solar, hydro, and wind power is good for environment.
>> CORRECT
I have the ability of concentration while reading and explaining something well.
>> I have the ability of concentrating well while reading and explaining something.
Have a happy weekend~!!^^
>> CORRECT!
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