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2017-08-04 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Opinion: What springs to mind when you hear the word 'power'? Is power a good or bad thing? Answer in not more than 5 sentences ================================================================= When I hear the word 'power', renewable energy and ability spring to my mind. Renewable energy like solar, hydro, and wind power is good for environment. I have the ability of concentration while reading and explaining something well. Have a happy weekend~!!^^

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름]! (^_^)


When I hear the word \'power\', government springs to my mind.

Governments have power over their territory.

I just hope, those who are working in and for the government will use their power in a good way.

Thank you for this composition. :)

Have a great weekend!


_T. Mayleen :)


When I hear the word \'power\', renewable energy and ability spring to my mind.

>> CORRECT!


Renewable energy like solar, hydro, and wind power is good for environment.

>> CORRECT


I have the ability of concentration while reading and explaining something well.

>> I have the ability of concentrating well while reading and explaining something.

Have a happy weekend~!!^^

>> CORRECT!

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