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Hi there, Ella!
Thanks for your composition! Wow! This was well-written! If I were in that situation, it would be difficult for me to decide. However, I guess I would pursue my travel plans because I already paid for it and there\'s no way I could get my money back.^^
T. JanE ^^
It would be wonderful if I meet the partner of my dreams.
>> Correct
but i will choose to go to travel as my plan.
>> But I would choose to travel as planned.
I would not be sure whether he is my soul mate or not even though he is the man who iIve dreamt.
>> Correct
i believe that people who have a destiny to meet must meet eachother.
>> I believe that people who are destined to meet each other must meet.
A year is not a long period.
>> Correct
And it can be possible to meet another partner of my dreams while i\'m traveling and also it is possible that he is the man who is my soulmate.
>> It can be possible to meet another partner of my dreams while I\'m traveling. It\'s also possible that he\'s my soul mate.
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