Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you for doing this Miss. [Name]!
I was really surprised how much waste households dispose of every week, whenever the garbage collection day comes TT
I could accept this kind of phenomenon that the amount of household garbage has been increasing year by year because it is applied to my house.
Many countries incerease the amount of household garbage going to landfill every years.
>>Many countries increase the amount of household garbage going to landfill every years.
There are some reasons and how to reduce it.
>> There are some reasons and solutions we can do to to reduce it.
First of all, many people want convenient life nowadays.
>> First of all, many people want a convenient life nowadays.
They use a lot of disposable products such as plastic bags, plastic spoons, paper cups etc.
>>CORRECT!
Landfill can be polluted because they have to need a long time to be decayed.
>>Landfills can be polluted because garbage needs a long time to be decayed.
Therefore people have to reduce disposable product as soon as possible.
>>Therefore, people have to reduce disposable product as soon as possible.
Next, people often buy something too much or on impluse although they don\'t need it really.
>>CORRECT!
Therefore when they are shopoing, they must decide a buying list.
>>Therefore when they are shopoing, they must make a buying list.
Also, exchanging products with neighborhood, friends and recycling are very important.
>>CORRECT!
Finally, many people don\'t have a interest about enviroment.
>> Finally, many people don\'t have any interest about environment.
Therefore, nation must make a variety of campaigns, advertising, education.
>>CORRECT!
Let\'s reduce household garbage! Let\'s save our land!
>>CORRECT!
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