homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [Name]!
Thanks for your composition! I think we depend on computers too much. I can\'t even imagine what our life would be like without them.^^
T. JanE ^^
If the computer had never been invented, our life would have not been convenient.
>> Correct
we even don\'t realize it in common but computer is connected with our living life too much.
>> We don\'t even realize it, but computers are too much connected with our life.
Computer calculates every possible mathematical data in a second and finds the results.
>> Correct
it makes our life to easy, convenient way.
>> It makes our lives easy and convenient.
If i have not used google map to find out the way to the new place i\'ve never been, i would have been in wrong place repeatly.
>> If I hadn\'t used Google map to find my destination, I would\'ve been lost repeatedly.
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