Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Good evening! ^^
I actually can see how hard you are trying to improve on your English skills.
I can see improvements little by little. I want to commend you with how bold you are in
using new vocabularies and you always try to express your ideas as much as possible.
It\'s a very good sign. :)
Don\'t worry because it\'s a gradual process.
It has to be step by step. Be patient with yourself.
Teacher Glenda
Today i just stayed at home.
>> Correct (Today, I just stayed at home.)
i watched the America series Friends ,i studied never-ending english and i did the laundry.
>> I watched the American series \'Friends\', I studied a never-ending English and I did the laundry.
thesedays i feel i`m standing still with my english i can`t explain about specific stuff and movie something when my speech door is blocked ,
>> These days, I feel I\'m stuck with my English and I can\'t explain about specific things or movies that it\'s like speech door is blocked.
i come up korean in my head first and then i try to speak english like what you said \"what did you learn from okja?
>> I can come up with ideas in Korean first then I try to translate it in English. An example was when you asked me about what I learned from the movie Okja.
i can say now okja is symbol of family feeling share and it shows
the capitalism from the begining and at the end
>> I can now say that Okja is a symbol of family and sharing. It shows about capitalism from the start to the end.
1.We arranged to meet at ten o\'clock last Sunday but John didn\'t turn up on time
>> Correct
2. I had better leave, I don\'t want to wear out my welcome.
>> Correct
3.. It was a mistake that I didn\'t called out the contract before signing it.
>>look through
4. John is a rich man because he went through a lot of money last year.
>> came into
5.Liz decided to get at dancing classes as she needed to lose weight urgently.
>> take up
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