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2017-08-07 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

Opinion: What springs to mind when you hear the word 'power'? Is power a good or bad thing? Answer in not more than 5 sentences.^-^ It is wrong to abuse power, but I believe that if you use it well, there is no problem.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]!^^


Thank you so much for doing your homework.

You did a good job in answering and in expressing your opinion.

Yes, it was short but concise. :)

Have a good night! See you tomorrow!^^


_T. Mayleen (^_-)


It is wrong to abuse power, but I believe that if you use it well, there is no problem.

>> CORRECT!

OR: It\'s wrong to abuse power, but I think if you\'d use it well then there wouldn\'t be a problem.

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