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That\'s how you do it, James! Pick up as many books as you can but make sure to read them. LOL
Thanks for dropping by the composition board. I hope that you get to learn something every time you do.
Expressing yourself in this manner is a good habit, isn\'t it?
You are now making it a habit, my friend.
But of course, I would truly understand if you\'re busy. You are also very apologetic when you miss your homework. Thank you!
You make me so proud!
May you continue to have a wonderful time, James.
Keep safe!
-Klein-
What do you need to pick up from somewhere later?
Why is that?
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I want to get a knowledge from the book in the bookstore.
>>I want to get knowledge from a book in a bookstore.
As you know, I am very busy and always tired so I don\'t have time to read books.
>>Correct
My wife always complains to me what I don\'t read books if I have time.
>>My wife always complains why I don\'t read books when I have time.
In the beginning of this year, I swore myself to read books.
>>In the beginning of this year, I swore to myself that I would read books.
My target was that I read a book per month.
>>My target was to read one book per month.
But unfortunately, I couldn\'t finish reading a book until now.
>>Unfortunately, I couldn\'t finish reading a book until now.
>>But I couldn\'t finish reading a book until now.
I know that I have to read and I have to learn from books.
>>Correct
That will make me very happy when I live with my family together.
>>That will make me very happy when I live together with my family.
I think I am lazy because if I have time, I go to sofa and turn on the TV,
>>I think I am lazy because when I have time, I turn on the TV and sit on the sofa.
after that I watch TV without purpose.
>>After that, I watch TV without purpose.
I have to change my bad habit for killing time, but it is very difficult to change it.
>>Correct
Anyway I want to pick up an information from books, and there are many books in a bookstore.
>>Anyway, I want to pick up information from books and there are many books in a bookstore.
So I will go there and I will swim in the knowledge.
>>Correct
OR >> So I will go there and swim in the knowledge.
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