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2017-08-08 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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What do you need to pick up from somewhere later? Why is that? ==> I want to get a knowledge from the book in the bookstore. As you know, I am very busy and always tired so I don't have time to read books. My wife always complains to me what I don't read books if I have time. In the beginning of this year, I swore myself to read books. My target was that I read a book per month. But unfortunately, I couldn't finish reading a book until now. I know that I have to read and I have to learn from books. That will make me very happy when I live with my family together. I think I am lazy because if I have time, I go to sofa and turn on the TV, after that I watch TV without purpose. I have to change my bad habit for killing time, but it is very difficult to change it. Anyway I want to pick up an information from books, and there are many books in a bookstore. So I will go there and I will swim in the knowledge.

강사 첨삭

That\'s how you do it, James! Pick up as many books as you can but make sure to read them. LOL

Thanks for dropping by the composition board. I hope that you get to learn something every time you do.

Expressing yourself in this manner is a good habit, isn\'t it?

You are now making it a habit, my friend.

But of course, I would truly understand if you\'re busy. You are also very apologetic when you miss your homework. Thank you!

You make me so proud!

May you continue to have a wonderful time, James.

Keep safe!

-Klein-

What do you need to pick up from somewhere later?
Why is that?
 ==>
 I want to get a knowledge from the book in the bookstore.
>>I want to get knowledge from a book in a bookstore.  

As you know, I am very busy and always tired so I don\'t have time to read books.

>>Correct
 My wife always complains to me what I don\'t read books if I have time.
 
>>My wife always complains why I don\'t read books when I have time.

In the beginning of this year, I swore myself to read books.
 
>>In the beginning of this year, I swore to myself that I would read books.

My target was that I read a book per month.
 
>>My target was to read one book per month.

But unfortunately, I couldn\'t finish reading a book until now.
 
>>Unfortunately, I couldn\'t finish reading a book until now.

>>But I couldn\'t finish reading a book until now.

I know that I have to read and I have to learn from books.
 
>>Correct

That will make me very happy when I live with my family together.
>>That will make me very happy when I live together with my family.
I think I am lazy because if I have time, I go to sofa and turn on the TV,
 
>>I think I am lazy because when I have time, I turn on the TV and sit on the sofa.

after that I watch TV without purpose.
>>After that, I watch TV without purpose.
I have to change my bad habit for killing time, but it is very difficult to change it.
>>Correct
Anyway I want to pick up an information from books, and there are many books in a bookstore.
 
>>Anyway, I want to pick up information from books and there are many books in a bookstore.

So I will go there and I will swim in the knowledge.

>>Correct

OR >> So I will go there and swim in the knowledge.

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