homework

What are some reason why privacy is important for you? In my opinion the humen is an independent organism and each organism is need to recovery because each organism are released waste matters waste matters is stress so the humen is must have to solve stress to recovery To me privacy is very important i'm have peace in one's mind by watching movie and TV show I like the most privacy is had dumplings(mandu) while watching movie and Tv show

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Thank you so much for your opinion about this topic.

Here’s my correction for you.

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Teacher Sunday

In my opinion the humen is an independent organism
>> In my opinion human is an independent organism.
and each organism is need to recovery
>> And each organism needs to recover.
because each organism are released waste matters
>> Because it releases waste substance.
waste matters is stress
>> This waste substance is what we called stress.
so the humen is must have to solve stress to recovery
>> Therefore humans need to be free from stress to recover.
To me privacy is very important
>> For me privacy is very important.
i\'m have peace in one\'s mind by watching movie and TV show
>> I get peace of mind through watching movies and TV shows.
I like the most privacy is had dumplings(mandu) while watching movie and Tv show

>> I like having privacy the most when watching movie and TV show while having dumplings/mandu.