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Despite the popular belief that watermelon is just water and sugar, watermelon is actually a nutrient dense food.
It provides high levels of vitamins, minerals, and antioxidants and just a small number of calories.^^
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
Watermelon is the perfect summer fruit.
It\'s loaded with water to keep you hydrated when you work out.
It helps to battle back against heart disease, arthritis, asthma, as well as several types of cancers.
(skinnyms.)
_T. Mayleen (^___^)
These days it is very hot so I like to eat a watermelon as a dessert.
>> These days it is very hot so I like to eat watermelon for dessert.
A watermelon is cool, juicy, and sweet.
>> Correct!
When it is hot, I usually eat a watermelon.
>> When it is hot, I usually eat watermelon.
I also like a watermelon salad that has pieces of a watermelon and soda.
>> I also like watermelon salad, a mixture of watermelon and soda.
Have a good night~!^^
>> Correct!
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