Homework!
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강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
Iceland is a very interesting place to visit.
You can see a lot of glaciers and volcanoes there.
I hope you will be able to visit it one day. See you later!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
A place I really like to visit someday is Iceland.
>>> Correct!
I thought that was fantastic and fabulous place when I was watching movie called \"The Secret life of Walter Mitty\".
>>> I saw that place when I was watching the movie \"The Secret Life of Walter Mitty\" and I think it\'s a fantastic and fabulous place to visit.
Even you can see in the movie \"Interstellar\".
>>> They also filmed the movie \"Interstellar\" there.
Iceland has been used to make a movies or fictions.
>>> A lot of fiction movies were filmed there.
And you can see a aurora in Iceland and I want to see that.
>>> I also want to see the aurora in Iceland.
I think if I visit Iceland than I will feel that I\'m in the another world that different earth.
>>> I think if I visit Iceland, I will feel that I\'m in another worlds.
So I really like to visit Iceland someday.
>>> Correct!
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