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It breaks my heart to see homeless people on the streets.

I strongly agree the providing jobs, instead of money, is the best idea^^

Most societies have their homeless people. Some people think that the best way to help them is to give them money.
To what extent do you agree?
In my opinion, there are two reasons why there are homeless people.

>>CORRECT!
  The first reason is because people don\'t have enough money.

>>CORRECT!
 If citizens are pool, the government should make a lot of employments.

>> If citizens are poor, the government should make a lot of jobs.
 Also, the government should give more money to people who work hard then other people.

>>Also, the government should give more money to people who work harder than other people.
  The second reason is because there are no enough houses.

>>CORRECT!
 When there are no enough homes, government should build more apartments and give priorities to people who don\'t have home.

>>When there are no enough homes, government should build more apartments and prioritize people who don\'t have home.
 In this case, apartment is better than normal houses.

>> In this case, apartments are better than normal houses.