homework.
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강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ella!
Thanks for your composition! I thought I wrote that you would choose an object, not an animal, to be reincarnated as. However, I will accept this answer. Maybe you can just give me another answer in class.^^
T. JanE ^^
I hopte that i would be reincarnated as bird living in forest.
>> I hope that I would be reincarnated as a bird living in a forest.
Then I could fly everywhere in the forest.
>> Correct
I wish i could take a rest on the tree in peaceful forest.
>> I wish I could take some rest on a tree in a peaceful forest.
There would be so much nutritious food for me.
>> Correct
I would not need to worry about starving.
>> Correct
So if I could be reincarnated, I would be a bird.
>> Correct
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