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2017-08-10 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

I hopte that i would be reincarnated as bird living in forest. Then i could fly everywhere in the forest. I wish i could take a rest on the tree in peaceful forest. There would be so much nutritious food for me. I would not need to worry about starving. So if i could be reincarnated, i would be a bird.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ella!

Thanks for your composition! I thought I wrote that you would choose an object, not an animal, to be reincarnated as. However, I will accept this answer. Maybe you can just give me another answer in class.^^

T. JanE ^^

I hopte that i would be reincarnated as bird living in forest.

>> I hope that I would be reincarnated as a bird living in a forest. 

Then I could fly everywhere in the forest.

>> Correct

I wish i could take a rest on the tree in peaceful forest.

>> I wish I could take some rest on a tree in a peaceful forest.

There would be so much nutritious food for me.

>> Correct

I would not need to worry about starving.

>> Correct

So if I could be reincarnated, I would be a bird.

>> Correct

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