Homework

2017-08-09 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

학생이 쓴 원문

1. I have a blue bike. 2. I don't have a red bike. 3. I’ll just buy one for my dinner. 4. One night, the ghost came to the house. 5. May I borrow your book? Yes, you may.

강사 첨삭

Hey Kid,


Wow!

You answered your homework so fast.

You are awesome!


Lets talk about your third sentence.

You made a  complete supporting sentence, however the idea is incomplete. It\'s not given.

The primary sentence is missing.

The primary sentence would\'ve pointed out what exactly is the \"one\" you\'re trying to buy for your dinner.


I\'ll see you tomorrow!


Goodnight!

:)

Teacher Amanda:)


1. I have a blue bike. 
CORRECT
2. I don\'t have a red bike.
CORRECT 
3. I’ll just buy one for my dinner.
>> I want to eat spaghetti for lunch but my mom already cooked fried chicken for me. I’ll just buy one for my dinner. 


4. One night, the ghost came to the house.
CORRECT 

Or

>> I\'ve seen a ghost in the house, one night. 


 5. May I borrow your book? Yes, you may.

CORRECT  


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