Homework

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Thank you very much for writing another essay on our composition board. 

I think government policies are used to serve as our guide in having a decent and peaceful society.

Unfortunately, many of these policies are ignored and set aside.

Most of the time, they are not implemented well.

I hope the Philippine government would also do it\'s best to implement its policies especially for the poor and oppressed.

Anyhow, I have faith in our current president and our new government.

I hope you\'re doing great.

I\'ll see you again tomorrow. :)
Take care always.

~Teacher Charry

Governments\' policies affect in real life and last quite long.

>> Governments\' policies affect us in real life and last quite long.

Because newly made laws and long term development projects are sometimes activated for more than decades.

>> It\'s because newly made laws and long term development projects are sometimes activated for more than a decade.

Therefore if the current government sets regulations and systematize well, those tendency about how to solve social problems will last quite long.

>> Therefore if the current government sets regulations and systematize them well, those tendencies about how to solve social problems will last quite long.

I want to write about current South Korean government\'s idea specifically.

>> I want to write about the current South Korean government\'s idea specifically.

I generally support current government policies.

>> I generally support the current government policies.

This government is now focusing on resolve social equality.

>> This government is now focusing on resolving social inequality.

For example, severe wage gap between permanent workers and temporary workers, riches who make money from speculation in real estate.

>> For example, the government is trying to solve the severe wage gap between permanent workers and temporary workers and control the riches from real estate.

I don\'t think these policies are too drastic because current South Korea has followed social welfare state from several decades ago.

>> I don\'t think these policies are too drastic because the current South Korea has followed the social welfare state several decades ago.

I personally hope the current government clears previous wrong doings and sets new foundations using systems and laws.

>> I personally hope the current government clears the previous wrong doings and sets new foundations using systems and laws.