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Hi [이름]! ^^

Good evening! ^^

Thank you for sending this composition.

I\'m happy to hear about positive experiences you have from work. :)

That only goes to show that your hard work are paying off and shown in small things. :)

Continue eyeing for your goal and don\'t worry too much. Okay?

Have a great weekend! ^^

Teacher Glenda

Today it wasn`t quite busier cuz there weren`t people who came to the our restaurant than i thought.

>> Today, it wasn\'t quite busy because there weren\'t a lot of people who came to our restaurant, lesser than I thought.

so we did clean our kitchen that we don`t nomally do and i cooked the steamed-egg for everyone. 

>> So we cleaned our kitchen which we don\'t normally do and I cooked steamed egg for everyone.

 while i was cleaning, i cooked it at the same time after cooking i put it the bowl to give one by one
each people then i said to everyone \"i hope you`ll like it , if something is not nice just say it`s not say \"

>> I was cleaning at the same time cooking. I put eggs in each of my co workers\' bowl and told them, \'I hope you\'ll like it, if not please say so.\'

But it was well received what i expected lol

>> But it was well received than I expected. 




ESSAY QUESTION:
Everyone has their own weak points. What is your biggest weakness in life?

Before i came to Australia , i have lots of weakness it`s like i`m very thin and i`m not getting a weight No matter how hard i exercise so much

>> Before I came to Australia, I had a lot of weaknesses, like I was very thin and I wasn\'t gaining weight no matter how hard I tried to exercise.

But since i got in here i had confident that i can do everything 

>> But since I got here, I had the confidence in everything that I do.

 Anyway now my biggest weakness in life is to worried evrything for instance 

>> Now, my biggest weakness is I worry about everything.

 What will i do in the future?? What kind of job i will be working?? and what do i have to talk when i go to work some kind of things hahaha

>> I worry about my future, what kind of job will I be working or what do I have to talk about when I go to work or some other random questions about my life.