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I totally agree with your opinion!

I know that money helps people, as it is a basic necessity; however, learning how to survive is more important^^

Thank you very much and see you!

Many societies have their homeless people.

>>CORRECT!

Some people think that giving them money is the best way to help them. But I don\'t think it\'s the best way to help them. There are some reasons. 

>>Some people think that giving them money is the best way to help them, but I don\'t think it\'s the best for I have some reasons. 
 First, just giving some money is not help because when they take the money, they will spend on it right away to buy alchol or bad things.

>> First, just giving some money is not help because when they take the money, they will spend it right away to buy alcohol or bad things.

 Therefore societies must give them a job instead of money to learn some money by oneself.

>>Therefore, societies must give them a job instead of money to earn some money by themselves.
 Second, There are a lot of homeless people.

>>Second, there are a lot of homeless people.

 Athough the societies give some money, it will be very small money.

>>Although societies give some money, it will be a very small amount.
 Finally, other people can somtimes feel frustrated.

>> Finally, other people can sometimes feel frustrated.

 Many people work hard and do their best so it is not fair.

>>CORRECT!

Of course we have to help the homeless people but it is the most important for them to have strong working will and working ability.

>>CORRECT!

Therefore our societies should help them those ways.

>>Hence, our societies should help them in those ways.
 I hope to disappear the homeless people and I want that everyone lives happy and has well-being life.

>>I hope there would be no homeless people and I want that everyone lives happily and has a well-being life.