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2017-08-10 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: Creative Writing: If you had to choose between a satisfying job and a well-paid one, which would you choose? Answer in not more than 5 sentences.^-^ If i had to choose between a satisfying job and a well-paid one, i will choose a well-paid one. Because if i going well-paid compony, I can do what i want to that money.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름]!^^


Thank you for accomplishing your homework.

To borrow Marino\'s words, you have to do what you have to do.

If sticking it out in a less-than-desirable job means putting food on the table, you do that.

(Gordon Marino, a philosophy professor from St. Olaf College)

I will talk to you again tomorrow!^^


Have a good night!


_T. Mayleen :)


If i had to choose between a satisfying job and a well-paid one, i will choose a well-paid one.

>> If I had to choose between a satisfying job and a well-paid one, I will choose a well-paid one.


Because if i going well-paid compony, I can do what i want to that money.

>> If I would get paid well in a company, I could do whatever I want to with the money.

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