homework

2017-08-10 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Tom was my best friend, but we fought for playing games. So we are not the best friends any more. 2. I trust my good friends, probably they trust me too. 3. You played with me many times. 4. I can call you any time. 5. I like visiting my friend’s house.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],


Awesome job for doing homework so fast!

You are such a diligent young man.

I like calling you young man because you seem to be more matured than your actual age. :)


See you tomorrow!

Sleep well!

Teacher Amanda:)


1. Tom was my best friend, but we fought for playing games. So we are not the best friends any more. 

>> Tom was my best friend, but we fought while playing games that\'s why we are not best friends anymore. 


2. I trust my good friends, probably they trust me too.

CORRECT


3. You played with me many times.

CORRECT


4. I can call you any time.

CORRCT


5. I like visiting my friend’s house.

CORRECT

>>I like going to my friend’s house.


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