Homework

Hi, [이름]! ^_^

I loved  your essay today.

I think it\'s well thought of.

Thank you! :)

I think people become happier when they are able to apply their knowledge in a real-life setting.

The knowledge that they have is useful and can be applied in day-to-day living.

Knowledge in itself cannot make you happy.

I think the good results that we get from applying our knowledge are the ones that make us truly happy.

Anyhow, this is just how I see it.

I hope you\'re doing great.

I\'ll see you again on Monday.

Take care.

~Teacher Charry :)

I don\'t think more knowledge makes people happier directly.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I don\'t think having more knowledge can directly make people happier.

Happiness and convenience at daily life is different and I don\'t think convenience means happiness.

>> Happiness and convenience in daily life is different and I don\'t think convenience means happiness.

Now a days, people have much more knowledge compared with ancient people.

>> Nowadays, people have much more knowledge compared with the ancient people.

We know why solar eclipse happens, why infectious diseases spread which ancient people didn\'t know.

>> We know why solar eclipse happens and why infectious diseases spread which ancient people didn\'t know.

However, it\'s not easy to say we are more happier than ancient people.

>> However, it\'s not easy to say we are happier than the ancient people.

In my opinion, knowledge itself doesn\'t enhance happiness right away.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> In my opinion, knowledge in itself cannot enhance happiness immediately.

We also need to think and process those knowledge to find happiness from them.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> There is also a need for us to think and process those knowledge to find happiness from them.

Knowing about how germs make people sick is not enough to be happy.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Knowing how germs infect people is not enough to be happy.

If we cure people with proper medical treatment based on the knowledge about germs, then we can have better quality of life and it helps to be happier than before.

>> If we cure people with proper medical treatment based on the knowledge about germs, then we can have a better quality of life and it helps us to be happier than before.