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2017-08-11 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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What is the most reluctant thing you've ever done? Explain your answer. When I was an elementary student, I had a dinner with my family. The menu was a curry, and I did not like to eat carrot in it. Because it was mushy and tasted weird. But I finally ate the carrots reluctantly because my father insist me to eat.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Grace!

Thanks for doing your homework!

I think kids normally don\'t like vegetables, especially carrots.

I don\'t know why but I\'ve always liked carrots even when I was young. :)

Please check my corrections here.

Ciao!

~Teacher Marie~ ^^

When I was an elementary student, I had a dinner with my family.

>> When I was an elementary school student, I had dinner with my family.
 The menu was a curry, and I did not like to eat carrot in it.

>> The menu was curry and I did not like eating it because it had carrots in it.
 Because it was mushy and tasted weird.

>> It was mushy and it tasted weird.
 But I finally ate the carrots reluctantly because my father insist me to eat.

>> In the end, I ate the carrots reluctantly because my father insisted that I eat them.

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