Homework
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강사 첨삭
Hi there, Grace!
Thanks for doing your homework!
I think kids normally don\'t like vegetables, especially carrots.
I don\'t know why but I\'ve always liked carrots even when I was young. :)
Please check my corrections here.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~ ^^
When I was an elementary student, I had a dinner with my family.
>> When I was an elementary school student, I had dinner with my family.
The menu was a curry, and I did not like to eat carrot in it.
>> The menu was curry and I did not like eating it because it had carrots in it.
Because it was mushy and tasted weird.
>> It was mushy and it tasted weird.
But I finally ate the carrots reluctantly because my father insist me to eat.
>> In the end, I ate the carrots reluctantly because my father insisted that I eat them.
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