homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.Since the church is built in this city, many people went to the church.
2. Why do you need to be friendly with other children or other people?
If I am friendly to other people, they would think I am a good person and like me.
Good night! ^^
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Hi Kiddo,
Thanks for doing your homework.
I hope you will have a very happy and productive weekend with your family and friends.
See you on Monday!
Take Care.
Teacher Amanda:)
1.Since the church is built in this city, many people went to the church.
>> Since the church was built in this city, many people go to church.
2. Why do you need to be friendly with other children or other people?
If I am friendly to other people, they would think I am a good person and like me.
>> If I am friendly to other people, they would think that I am a good person and they will like me.
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