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2017-08-14 · 첨삭 강사 Sunday

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Which is more important, increasing people's standard of living, or protecting the environment? -> I think people should protect the environment. People can live with a little inconvenience, but it is hard to get back if the environment is broken. So I try to clean the environment. This is a very important issue.

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I think people should protect the environment.

>>CORRECT

OR>>

>> In my opinion protecting the environment is more important than increasing the standard of living.
People can live with a little inconvenience, but it is hard to get back if the environment is broken.

>> People can manage to live with a little inconvenience, but it is hard to restore if the environment is ruined.
So I try to clean the environment.

>> So, I try to clean my surroundings.
This is a very important issue.

>> This is a very crucial issue these days.

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