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Hi there, Ella!
Thanks for your composition! I think that party you have in mind would be really interesting. I hope you\'d invite me.^^

T. JanE ^^

If i could plan a party with money is no object, i want to borrow a big house with pool near country side.

>> If I could plan a party where money is no object, I would rent a big house with a pool near the countryside.

Then i buy some food like beef, pork, chicken for barbecue and various drinks at the market.

>> Then I would buy some food like beef, pork, chicken for barbeque, and various drinks in the market.

I\'ll invite all my best friends to my party house.

>> I would invite all my best friends to the house party.

For a day time and night,i will spend enjoyable time with them by playing game, eating food, drinking.

>> For the whole day and night, I would spend enjoyable time with them by playing games, eating food, and drinking.

with noisy music, we will have a cool time to get rid of all stress.

>> With loud music, we will have a cool time and get rid of all our stress.