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Managing money as early as we can is definitely helpful to avoid more money-related problems in the future^^

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Many people say that all secondary and higher secondary school sdudents have to learn how to manage money becasue it is a very important skill of life.

>>Many people say that all secondary and higher secondary school sdudents have to learn how to manage money because it is a very important skill of life.

 I also agree that opinion for some reasons.

>> I also agree with that opinion for some reasons.
 First, thesesdays credit cards are generally used when we are shopping, buying sth, paying everything.

>> First, these days, credit cards are generally used when we are shopping, buying sth, paying for everything.

But using credit card thoughtless can occur bad consequences such as dept, fight, divorce and suicide etc., therefore adults have to teach the students how to manage money. 

>> But using credit card thoughtlessly can lead to bad consequences such as dept, fight, divorce and suicide etc., therefore, adults have to teach the students how to manage money. 
Second, when they are taught how to manage money, they can correctly decide to buy or not to buy something.

>>CORRECT!

 It is very impartant thing to live because money is always limited.

>> It is a very important thing to live because money is always limited.
 Finally, when they are a student, their parents have to help them but when they become adults, they should take a responsibility about using money.

>>Finally, when they are a student, their parents have to help them but when they become adults, they should take the responsibility for spending money
 So, they have to take a fixed amount of money every month and they must write down where they use it and the sum of money.

>>CORRECT!