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2017-08-16 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Use your imagination. How will people communicate in the future? This is the most difficult homework because I am not a creative person. Well..When I was young, There is the only one way to communicate is speaking English. So, I admired people who could speak English. However, there are lots of translation programs so people who can speak English can communicate others easily. Of course that programs are not perfact so sometimes it translate wrongly but it is really useful to use when people can't speak any other languages. I think there will be one language that we can communicate each other in the future. People will invest the easy language and some machine which will help us to talk.

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Thanks a lot Miss [이름] for taking your time to write this essay. 

I made the necessary corrections for your sentences.

Kindly review them. See you tomorrow!


~Teacher Shanee^^,

   

Use your imagination. How will people communicate in the future?

This is the most difficult homework because I am not a creative person.

>>> Correct!
 Well..When I was young, There is the only one way to communicate is speaking
English.

>>> Well, when I was young, the only way to communicate with foreigners is to speak in English.

So, I admired people who could speak English.

>>> Correct!

However, there are lots of translation programs so people who can speak English can communicate
others easily.

>>> However, there are lots of translation programs so people who can speak English can communicate with others easily.

Of course that programs are not perfact so sometimes it translate wrongly but it is really useful to use when people can\'t speak any other languages.

>>> Of course those programs are not perfect so sometimes the translations are incorrect. But those are really useful to people who can\'t speak other languages.

I think there will be one language that we can communicate each other in the future.

>>>I  think there will be one language that we can use to communicate with each other in the future.

People will invest the easy language and some machine which will help us to talk.

>>> People will invest in the production of some machines which can help us talk to other people easily.

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