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2017-08-16 · 첨삭 강사 Rain

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Writing Task! In not less than 5 sentences, share your thoughts about this: Playing video games. I like playing board games not video games Ilike board games because i can play with my younger brother it is fun to play do you play board games it is funto play with friends have fun in playing gmaes

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

What kind of board game do you like? Nowadays, I haven\'t played board games.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the topic. I appreciate your effort! ^^

I revised your sentences and  I placed some reminders. I hope it would be useful for you.

Anyway, have a great day and take care!

~Teacher Rain~

I like playing board games not video games

>> I like playing board games and not video games. (Don\'t forget your period)
 Ilike board games because i can play with my younger brother

>> I like board games, because I can play with my younger brother. (\"I\" should always be capitalized)
 it is fun to play

>> It is fun to play. (Capitalized the first word of your sentences)
 do you play board games

>> Do you play board games? (Don\'t forget your question mark if it\'s a question)
 it is funto play with friends 

>> It is fun to play board games with friends.
 have fun in playing gmaes

>> So have fun in playing board games.

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