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Hi, [이름]! (^^,)
How\'s your Wednesday so far?
Thank you very much for writing in our composition board and sharing your thoughts and ideas.
Sometimes we have to say white lies in order to avoid hurting the feelings of other people, especially when we know that they\'re emotionally sensitive or may be going through difficult situations.
However, I also believe in the saying: \"The truth hurts but it would set you free\".
I honestly believe that, the truth serves as our eye opener.
It allows us to be conscious of our flaws or whatever it is that\'s lacking in us.
When you know the truth, you do your best to make the wrong things right.
Sometimes it\'s really difficult to be honest with other people, especially with the people we care about but there\'s only so much we could do for them.
At some point, they have to learn about the truth so they could start doing the following:
make amends if they offended someone; heal if they got hurt; forgive if someone offended them; improve if they perceive that something is lacking or needs improvement; and of course, start moving on.
I hope you are having a nice day.
Stay happy and safe.
See you again tomorrow. ^^
Take care always.
~Teacher Charry (^^,)
I think sometimes, deception can be justified.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I think deception can be justified sometimes.
Basically being honest is the best way to people\'s own conscience and common good.
>> [Do you mean]: Basically, being honest is the best way for people to have a clean conscience. It is also for the common good.
However I think using deception sometimes protects individuals\' feelings.
>> However, I think using deception sometimes protects individuals\' feelings.
Especially falling in self-deception is a sad thing but also needed to some people.
>> Falling in self-deception is especially a sad thing, but it is also needed by some people.
I worked as a tutor when I was in college and one of my student was from relatively poor family.
>> I worked as a tutor when I was in college and one of my students was from a relatively poor family.
When I saw her mother, she always told me how her family was rich before.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> When I saw her mother, she always told me that her family used to be rich.
At first, I didn\'t understand why she talked those things to me and honestly I was annoyed.
>> At first, I didn\'t understand why she talked to me about those things and honestly, I was annoyed.
I thought there\'s no use of recalling those good old days, repeatedly talking about it to a stranger like me.
>> I thought there\'s no use of recalling those good old days and repeatedly talking about it to a stranger like me.
Later, I thought maybe her stories wouldn\'t help to improve the situation in practical way at the moment but it would help her to have a hope and get another chance to success.
>> Later, I thought maybe her stories wouldn\'t help to improve the situation in a practical way at the moment but it would help her to have a hope and get another chance at success.
Some deceptions are not immoral and don\'t harm other people.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Some deceptions don\'t stay forever and don\'t harm other people.
In those cases, maybe deception can be justified and help people.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> In those instances, maybe deception can be justified and could help people.
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