Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good morning, James!
This is so nice of you! Thanks a lot! Your sweet words just made my day.
I just hope you won\'t call your English poor anymore. The reason we are practicing is for you to be better. May you feel the changes in your English communication skills soon!
If not, just let me know.
We might be doing something inappropriate.
Once again, thank you!
Enjoy the rest of the day as well, James!
Catch you later!
-Klein-
P.S.
Have a safe trip!
Which is the most interesting part of our conversation today?
What makes it interesting?
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I think that you have a great ability to make a topic in our class.
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We don\'t use textbook but I think we have a good time in our class.
>>We don\'t use the textbook, but I think we have good time in our class.
As you know, I am introvert, so if someone doesn\'t talk to me I don\'t say anything all day.
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But I think our class is very interesting and active because you lead well.
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What do you think about my opinion?
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Today I tried to explain about the problem of apartment when we live in.
>>Today, I tried to explain about the problem in the apartment we live in.
The topic was an accustomed thing and it\'s hard to explain to you about my situation with my neighbor.
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Anyway I appreciate to you because you listened carefully my poor English.
>>Anyway, I appreciate you listening carefully to my poor English.
Thanks and have a rest time happily.
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