Homework

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Thanks for your time in writing an essay.

I totally appreciate it.

I loved reading about your point-of-view.

I think both are admired but on a different basis and qualifications.

Heroes are admired for their nobility and celebrities are admired for their good looks and talent.

Each have a different purpose.

Anyhow, this is just my opinion about the matter.

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I think people can admire anyone.

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OR >> In my opinion, people can admire anyone.

However I can understand why statements like \'people shouldn\'t admire someone just because they are famous\' is made.

>> However, I can understand why statements like, \'people shouldn\'t admire someone just because they are famous\' is made.

When people admire someone, they would try to follow the admired person\'s thoughts or behaviors.

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OR >> When a person is admired, his admirers would try to follow his/her thoughts or behaviors.

If the admired person is famous for bad things like crime, then blind admirers can harm themselves and even society.

>> If the admired person is famous for bad things like crime, then blind admirers can harm themselves and even the society.

For example, there was a famous female most wanted few years ago in Korea.

>> For example, there was a famous most wanted female a few years ago in Korea.

She was quite pretty and some people made a fan club after they saw her picture on wanted leaflets.

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OR >> She was very beautiful and some people created a fan club for her after seeing her picture on wanted leaflets.

Just admiring someone is individuals\' own freedom but certainly there are people who are not recommended to admire due to a ripple effect.

>> Just admiring someone is an individuals\' own right but there are certainly people who are not recommended to be admired due to a ripple effect.

If the definition of heroes in this question is people who are not only famous but also have good traits, then admiring heroes is generally better than admiring only famous people.

>> If the definition of heroes in this question are people who are not only famous but also have good traits, then admiring heroes is generally better than admiring only famous people.

Still, I don\'t think setting criteria on whom we should admire is a good idea on the ground of individuals\' own freedom.

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OR >> However, I don\'t think setting criteria on whom we should admire is a good idea on the ground of individuals\' own freedom.